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Water poured over the lip of the rock in a smooth curve and roared down into a chasm. Far below, it tumbled and foamed into a pool. The rays if the setting sun set a myriad of trapped rainbows dancing in the spray. -Jeff Zhang -Warriors The Fourth Apprentice

Mikkel's lips moved wordlessly. He took in a great, shuddering breath that racked his body. With a final effort he spoke one word. "You," he said, and died. Kathryn :P. The Outcasts, by John Flanagan

Fireheart stared back without blinking. He was a warrior now. He had had made an enemy of the clan's deputy, but Tigerclaw had made an enemy of him. JUSTice:)

A brilliant moonbeam was slanting through a gap in the curtains.The moonbeam was brighter than ever. Her eyes peered out the window. Erin <3 !
Her skin was a smooth swirl of light tan and medium tan, the different shades twisted and melted into and out of each other in a natural way of wood. Her tiny feet stood tiptoe on the round base. Angel robes draped over her grace-filled form, and her open wings seemed to light the earth. Grace-

===** Flotillas of pink tulips and white pillar candles bobbed lazily in the pool, and tiny twinkling lights hung from every tree, approximating the stars L.A.'s smog layer sometimes obscured. ~ Renite :P **===

I got this burst of strenght. it wasn't superhuman or anything handy like that, but it was enough. I bent Chuck's thumbs back a millimeter of two. My windpipe popped open. I sucked int his little whistle of air, looked him right in the eye and said what I needed to say. "Res judicata." EM

Bluestar stopped once more. She chose a sun-warmed rock to sit upon, flat and wide enough for all five cats to rest side by side.Keimin :)

The far ends of the high-vaulting chamber was taken up by a semicircular dais. Atop this stood a chair carved with twining vines, and in it sat the queen of the Oakenfolk.

"Help!" I shouted. "Someone, plese help me! Please!" The wind snatched my words away and drowned them in the tumble of waves and spray. -Emma

"Oh, honey." She stood there behind me, not quite touching. I could hear her breathing.I could feel her wanting to touch me and not knowing if she should. If she did, I thought I might fall apart completely. -Emma

What has happened Where is the pale king he asked wildly. they where to overjoyed to hear him speak, nor did they understand his question. At length he gathered from Sam that they had seen nothing but a vague shadowy shapes coming towards them. John

I better hold on tight. If I don't I'll fall and be sucked into oblivion.

flinging ice crystals against the cat's faces. Shards of it flew into their eyes and clung to their fur. Scrambling up the steep slope, Jayfeather wailed in alarm...- Joseph

 * Wow! You have been adding some powerful writing samples, Writers! Keep up the good work! **

On the top of the oak tree stood a bird. It balanced precariously on one claw, it stared at me with a hypnotic gaze and then, I was sucked into oblivion.

Film camp didn't just go out with a bang- this was an explosion. Mr. Von Kruper, true to his word, had arranged a bona fida movie premiere, complete with all the glitter. Iris

From his perch behind the clock, Hugo could see everything. He rubbed his fingers nervously against the small notebook in his pocket and told himself to be patient. Emily.

It seemed to Krista that her only real friend was the bulb at the back of the fridge, winking on and off, inviting her in for nibble. Salisa

Outside, a slash of lightning scratches the sky. Inside, a spark streaks out of the fireplace. -Joseph

Beaks clip my ear, my shoulder, the back of my head.Birds peck my arms. Birds dive for my eyes. Big black birds, sharp eyed blue jays, and vicious brown hawks surround me. "Bird strike!" somebody yells.-Joseph

the only reason I'm not ordinary is that no one else sees me that way.-Wonder-Ian!!!!!!!!!!

whoever saves one life, saves the wold entire-talmund yurushami- Ian!!!!!!!!!!

I didn't want to be an extreme case. I wanted to be an easy case: //hey, good job. You're a hero. have a cookie.-//magnus Chase and the Gods of Asgard-ian!!!!!!!!!!